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The review of the official reviewer
for the dissertation of Raslana Salmanova on the topic: “Transformation of public
administration in the field of urban development”, submitted for a doctorate degree
in the specialty “6D051000 - State and Local Government”
в„– Criteria Eligibility (one of the answer options must Justification of the
p/p be checked) position of the
official reviewer
1. The topic of the thesis (as 1.1 Compliance with priority areas of science The title of the
of the date of its development or government programs: dissertation
approval) corresponds to corresponds to the
the directions of priority areas of
development of science science and state
and / or state programs programs
1) The thesis was completed within the The dissertation was
framework of a project or target program carried out in
financed from the state budget (indicate the accordance with the
name and number of the project or program) strategy "Kazakhstan-
2) The thesis was completed within the 2050: a new political
framework of another state program (indicate course of the
the name of the program) established state", the
3) The thesis corresponds to the priority National
direction of the development of science, Development Plan of
approved by the Higher Scientific and the Republic of
Technical Commission under the Government Kazakhstan until
of the Republic of Kazakhstan (indicate the 2025, The State
direction) program "Digital
Kazakhstan"
2. Importance for science The work makes / does not make a significant The dissertation
contribution to science, and its importance is advances the
well disclosed/not disclosed scholarly
understanding of how
the Kazakhstani
public administration
has evolved and
changed in the field of
urban development.
The study also
performs rich data
analyses that provide
a clear indication of
the changes that may
be required to
improve the urban
development process
and increase citizen
satisfaction
3. The principle of Self-reliance level: The dissertation
independence 1) High; reveals an original
2) Medium; thinking of the
3) Low; doctoral student, a
4) No independence collection of a wide
range of interesting
data, and very precise
analyses of legal and